30 comments on “Friday Fiction: The Chase Continues

  1. Oh not sure about the breathing through a reed thing, something bad is about to happen.
    Well done R E for continuing the tension, hope things get better next week.



  2. Loved the pacing and intriguing that he doesn’t know why those who are chasing him want to kill him-thank God he is intelligent enough to have escaped from their clutches till now-hopefully his luck will hold.Loved the images you painted with your words-I could feel the tension and see the scene unfolding-excellent take:-)


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