30 comments on “Friday Fiction: The Chase Continues

  1. Oh not sure about the breathing through a reed thing, something bad is about to happen.
    Well done R E for continuing the tension, hope things get better next week.

    Dee

  2. Loved the pacing and intriguing that he doesn’t know why those who are chasing him want to kill him-thank God he is intelligent enough to have escaped from their clutches till now-hopefully his luck will hold.Loved the images you painted with your words-I could feel the tension and see the scene unfolding-excellent take:-)

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