28 comments on “Friday Fiction: The Tables Turn

  1. What an intriguing story! Your detailed description is so vivid and engages all of the senses. I wonder why Mark is being chased?!?!
    Also, thank you for educating me on the bulkhead. Amazing job!


  2. Nice story. I’ve been thinking about trying serialise a few of my short stories. Had a read of what you have so far – I believe this deserves a tip of the cap, so to speak


  3. Great action scene and detail in this. This is actually a really cool way to write a thriller, through a series of pictures. I’m really enjoying it.


  4. Great pacing and am glad that Mark turned the tables on his attacker-now holding my breath for the next bit-will he talk or won’t he? :D


Please Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s